June
20
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once upon a time there was a happy group of animals.there was a zebra a lion a monkey and a giraffe they all playing happily until a big elephant came along and wanted to play so he asked . No we don’t won’t you we were playing our favourite game of chasing . the elephant walked off sadly he went to his mum and cried andto her lap.a day went past and he wanted to go again and made a speech and went there again here atΒ bigger than all of the animals and then deliverred his speech I am a elephant and i declare to play. i have been dying to ask you for ages .ok say all the animals all played . the end.
Hi Am
I love your story, but maybe check your capital letters and full stops before submitting it. But otherwise your story was great.
From Caelin ππ
Hi Am bat,
I love your story, but maybe next time add less full stops and more capital letters i like how you have used dying instead of waiting.
Good job.
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